Forever Clean A story I wrote when I was 8 over the years I have reeditied this a cople of times and resubmiteed it fore home work and got a a every time this is the originil and only serviving edit as the outheres were lost when my computer died.
Forever Clean
Medowdale, a Quiet Peaecful village in the Yorkshire dales. The early morning quiet was shattered when the community was woken up by the rumble of several large vans arriving along the main street. Men jumped out and placed a large blue bottle and an envelope on every doorstep. People looked out of the window, and saw what was happening, went down to investigate and take the bottles inside. Forever Clean it said on the bottle the only cleaner you will ever need. Mrs King took the bottle into the kitchen and opened the envelope. Inside was a blue sheet of paper which said, Forever clean is a new type of product, from forever Pharmaceuticals, which will eradicate all germs in the home, not only from surfaces but as the liquid evaporates, it will kill germs in the air. She opened the bottle, it contained a thick blue liquid that smelt faintly of roses. She thought that she might as well try it as it was free. Getting out a cloth she wiped down all the surfaces in the kitchen, at she left the room there was a faint smell of roses in the air. A few days later Mrs King felt unwell, sick with a stomach ache.
I dont want to post the whole thing as I dont want it pelagrised but if you want the rest I will pm you the link to where I fulle uploaded it.